29 May 2011

Move Me

'Soft Light' by Pino

fill the hollow of my shoulder
with symmetry of lips
tongue a fearless path along
katana arc of neck

breathe erotic touchstones
into pearl-pink ears
abrade with teeth and chin
bare wanton nape

slip unhurried hands around
carnal ellipse of hips
pour liquid ecstasy kisses
into open-mouthed desire

just
move me

16 comments:

  1. lol Wow this is sooooo sexy sensual gorgeous gad I feel like eating a juicy ripe peach! :*) wild moved me my lovely D always Beez :))

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  2. Anonymous30 May, 2011

    Beautiful sensual words and also felt caressed by them.
    M.

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  3. that is a morning light; the best time to take cut flowers

    this poem is you at your best

    i love the challenge and command form at the end

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  4. WritingInRain30 May, 2011

    One Of Your Best Pieces!

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  5. wow. so engaging and sensual and marvelous flow...caught up in that moment to movement...

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  6. ooh...so sensuous...love it.. :)

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  7. beautifully and tenderly sensual...drank your words like wine.

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  8. I dig how sensual, yet dangerous this is, with words like "katana", "teeth", and "carnal." Thrilling! :D

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  9. Lovely and beautifully sensual, the way words, desires, and love should be..

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  10. Such a great imagery and a sensuous piece.

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  11. this is simply amazing... well written very romantic.. you certainly moved me

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  12. Wow really romantic I must say
    Wth no shades of grey
    As you showed the love one could get
    If by that bug they are bit
    Enjoyed your one shot for the day
    Here at your way

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  13. Lovely and sensual....

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  14. carnal ellipse of hips > woooo! what a line. Sensual piece Di

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