Come and find me where the wild roses grow.
I love the hit on the syllables at the start of the line (which I do too) and the thrust into another woman's life. Really good. x
Ordinary, my eye. ;-)
smiles. she is quite the wman woman it sounds to me...very nice...
hmmm - sounds good with the dangerous curves..smiles...great to see you at dverse diana
Reads like a novel. Great discription.
knees embedded with cinders >beautiful linegreat to see you @ d'Verse... good times my friend
great piece :-)
I can see her, perhaps in a backwards looking mirror. esp like"..A custom fit/body of work..."--Love this Diana.
And this is why I have such respect for women. They must have the hardness of men (maybe even harder) but require the softness of the nurturing being. Packages of feelings that can explode in rage or affection. And, if they have the ability to turn words into such images as in this poem, I am in awe of them.
My thanks to all who have stopped by to read and comment. You have my gratitude x
You do write in such a lovely way. The third stanza is my favorite :)
Quite the woman indeed, powerful last line too, as most will never know.
Oh delight in the feminine in this write and all that is wonderful about it...and simply said she is not just some woman...but a miracle ...bkm
Diana! This is fantastic, awesome, powerful, and oh so very true! Loved the way you ended...for me, that was the best. From some woman to another...Mucho Respect! And thanks for linking up with us...I think this little world of poetry is going to rock :)