21 July 2011

Two by Two

Photo ~ Diana Matisz

two beds
two rooms
two worlds

separate

one writhing need
one wanton abandon
two conjure two 

rumpled madness in

two beds
two rooms
two worlds

separate

5 comments:

  1. So many connotations, and a great rhythm to boot. Nicely done. The picture really adds to it too. Did you write the poem based on the picture, or find the picture for the poem?

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  2. two sad...

    been there...but made it back...

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  3. Lonely - when two is supposed to infer together
    nicely done

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  4. Hello Diana,
    great to read some of your poetry again. Sometimes so much is contained in few words. Like this frugal form.
    Martin

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